Thank you! I admit I have a line break addiction. 😆 I do it even my book with isolating lines or shorter paragraphs and I've gotten feedback that it works and also that it's distracting so I appreciate that you fall on the side of generally liking them, at least in this format haha.
And I always love your take on these too! I'm always trying to straddle the line of familiar enough to relate but ambiguous enough to leave it open to interpretation so I really appreciate that you get that! 🖤
Sigh- really well written!
Oh thank you!!!! 🖤🖤🖤
Thank you!!! 🖤 I really appreciate that, I'm SO bad at poetry but I was going for that kind of vibe!
Mesmerizing!!! 😮 You're too kind!!
Thank you! I admit I have a line break addiction. 😆 I do it even my book with isolating lines or shorter paragraphs and I've gotten feedback that it works and also that it's distracting so I appreciate that you fall on the side of generally liking them, at least in this format haha.
And I always love your take on these too! I'm always trying to straddle the line of familiar enough to relate but ambiguous enough to leave it open to interpretation so I really appreciate that you get that! 🖤