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I loved this, Angela!! The flow was so melodic, like poetry!

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Thank you!!! 🖤 I really appreciate that, I'm SO bad at poetry but I was going for that kind of vibe!

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Aug 20Liked by Angela Tyler

Sigh- really well written!

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Oh thank you!!!! 🖤🖤🖤

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deletedAug 20Liked by Angela Tyler
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Mesmerizing!!! 😮 You're too kind!!

Thank you! I admit I have a line break addiction. 😆 I do it even my book with isolating lines or shorter paragraphs and I've gotten feedback that it works and also that it's distracting so I appreciate that you fall on the side of generally liking them, at least in this format haha.

And I always love your take on these too! I'm always trying to straddle the line of familiar enough to relate but ambiguous enough to leave it open to interpretation so I really appreciate that you get that! 🖤

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